Wikijunior talk:World Heritage Sites/Machu Picchu

Copying from WP
Sorry that I seem to be following your edits (in fact, I'm just reviewing all the edits/pages needing review in the recent changes), but I don't agree to the idea of copying straight from WP, even giving credits to it. The language used at WP might be too advanced for a young reader to comprehend (see Wikijunior: "The aim of this project is to produce age-appropriate non-fiction books for children from birth to age 12"). I don't believe a 12-year-old can easily comprehend WP content.

I figure that if you desire to create a page, then you should create the page in your own words rather than copy it from a source (let alone that source being Wikipedia). Thanks. --Atcovi (Talk - Contribs) 19:32, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * It's fine, being new here I am still unaware of the conventions. I gave credits to it just to prevent any copyright issues. I did take the bulk of contents from Wikipedia but reduce it to what a 12 year old could understand. I paraphrased some, explained some. If there are any words that are to difficult to understand, do inform me. I'll take note of using my own words in the future. I hope you could provide some areas of improvement. Thanks.--Cohaf (discuss • contribs) 19:38, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I had reworded some of the sentences and now it should be less similar, see this.--Cohaf (discuss • contribs) 20:48, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me -- and yes, I'll try to make an effort to improve your new pages, but alas, time is limited for me (education & busy with other projects, here on WB and WV). Thanks. Atcovi (Talk - Contribs) 21:26, 29 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I think for the next book I'll start it in userspace. Hopefully it's not annoying to you if I let you review before moving into mainspace. Thanks for your time, sorry for troubling you. I appreciate the patience you have and that's something I can learn when I am patrolling pages in my home projects. --Cohaf (discuss • contribs) 22:13, 29 December 2018 (UTC)