Wikijunior talk:Ancient Civilizations/Babylonians

Hanging Gardens
While the historical validity of the Hanging Gardens may be questioned, I think taking out a sentence that discusses this concept to be out of line, particularly without some sort of discussion. Clearly this module needs some work, but the Hanging Gardens are a cultural icon that has survived throughout the ages and is something that a typical person with a little bit of knowledge of ancient history will be familiar with. --Rob Horning 16:12, 20 October 2005 (UTC)


 * Any mention of them should include a mention of the question of if they existed.Geni 01:12, 22 October 2005 (UTC)

Great job!
This is a great module. It seems almost complete, but it has headings with no writing for them. Thanks for contributing this module to Wikibooks and most importantly to Wikijunior. Tannersf 02:00, 5 December 2006 (UTC)

Coverage
The hanging gardens (mentioned above) should be included. My reason, though, is not the same -- it's because it's been listed at one of the seven wonders of the ancient world. The existence question and the location question should be included, though briefly; we don't want to puzzle our young readers.

Also needs an introduction, as stated above.

Accuracy
As far as I know, the things are quite accurate, but I don't know everything in here so I can't be sure that the whole thing is accurate.

Grammar and tone
Perfect. I like this one.

This module is quite good were it not for the lack of an introduction. I like it.  Kayau  David Copperfield  MOBY DICK   the great gatsby  06:48, 3 August 2009 (UTC)