Wikijunior talk:Ancient Civilizations/Akkadians

Confusing
...each floor up gets progressively smaller until you reach the top room...

I am 13 and I think that instead of using the word progressively You should say that ...each floor up gets smaller and smaller...

Wedge shaped symbols were inscribed on clay tablets with a reed stylus ...Many neighboring countries later adopted this writing method to record their own language (Eblaites, Hittites, Hurrites, Elamites)

What are wedge shaped symbols or reed stylus? I sugest giving an example.

were inscribed on clay tablets how about saying were carved into clay tablets.

...it was overcome by neighboring city-states ...

You might want to explain what a city-state is.


 * Bdavis

i think it's not fair to say jews and arabs, no offense to jews but i think arabs represent many semitic groups and jews are not as many as them also not to forget arabs are modern compared to their ancient ancestors.and logically AND is considered commutative so no big deal.

pacifist