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Wikijunior:Biology
It is a good book for beginner science enthusiasts to learn science. Perfect for ages 9 to 11 IMO. Kayau ( talk &#124; email &#124; contribs ) 04:21, 23 May 2010 (UTC)


 * The only improvement I might suggest is to merge Wikijunior:Biology/Kingdoms/Plants/Photosynthesis into Wikijunior:Biology/Kingdoms/Plants for consistency. Every other kingdom is on one page, and I think plants module is quite short compared to earlier modules. Thenub314 (talk) 16:56, 1 July 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm slowly working my way through the book doing some general copyedits. There also seems to be some Over-Capitalization and irregular boldfacing that ought to be at least regularized.  (I'm inclined to de-capitalize to sentence case; the boldfacing mainly bothers me by its inconsistency, but I don't plan to propose what to do about it till I've been all the way through with the basic copyediting, so I have a sense of usage patterns across the whole.)  My general impression of the book, modulo these details, is quite positive.  --Pi zero (talk) 18:34, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I've finished a once-through with copyediting; there was one paragraph that was really far below the quality of the rest of the book, which I've worked on a lot but am still not completely happy with, at Wikijunior:Biology/Systems/Nervous System/Senses. It also seems to me that that page should probably be merged into its parent, Wikijunior:Biology/Systems/Nervous System, for much the same reason as for photosynthesis (just with systems rather than kingdoms).  I still need to work out what overall strategy to recommend for the whole book on capitalization and boldfacing.  --Pi zero (talk) 15:18, 4 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Seems like a good book. Maybe more detail would be nice but it is of course aimed towards beginners/kids.--ЗAНИA [[Image:Flag_of_Italy.svg|15px]]talk 11:57, 4 July 2010 (UTC)


 * It's a good introduction to biology; it could use a bit more detail though. Herr Beethoven (talk) 02:58, 25 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Concurring with above statements --Thereen (talk) 03:34, 19 August 2010 (UTC)