User talk:UMstudent

Hey UMstudent. I worked on your Least Weasel page, and I thought I might leave a couple more thoughts/suggestions here. The activity section "active day and night" was not clear to me until the very end where you write that they are active when prey is. Could you give examples of specific rodents so it makes more sense? Also their lifespan being "a few years" is very vague. If you could find a source with a more specific number, that would be awesome. I do think your information is well organized and easy to understand, but it would be a lot more helpful if it was not so vague. Warmfuzzies (discuss • contribs) 17:30, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

Suggestions I have for your House Mouse species description: Your size section is a bit choppy. I suggest trying to piece together some of your points to make it flow a little better. I also placed a marker in the range section, as I feel some of your sections may need more citations. But these are just suggestions, overall I think you did a great job! Your similar species section is very clear and written in plain language.(CapsaBT (discuss • contribs) 11:25, 16 October 2012 (UTC))

Thank you for putting up your user page, UMstudent. Please take some time to develop the page and explore some of the features and formatting of Wikitext. --AdventureWriter (discuss • contribs) 16:00, 30 September 2012 (UTC)