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Muggles' Guide edits
I do appreciate your point of view on Draco and Slytherin House, but I'm afraid I had to rework them pretty heavily.

This being a textbook, we can't really use "I think" in it; we have to stay with a neutral point of view. That said, your opinion can easily be put in by working in the passive voice: "Some readers believe", for instance.

I had to trim the info box text down to a minimum; can't put too much in there or it gets unreadable. I reworked your comments about Draco in the Greater Picture section, to make them fit a bit better with the tone of the book, and I moved your more general comments about Slytherin into the Greater Picture section of the article on that House, and expanded them.

I do have to take issue with some points of your characterization; Draco seems to take an awful lot of glee in tormenting Harry, Ron, and Hermione when he has the power to do so. I won't say he's evil, though he has potential to go that way; but he is quite clearly a classic bully, abusing power whenever he has it. Chazz (talk) 17:40, 17 December 2014 (UTC)