User talk:Piscesmoodphase

Hi! I think it's a lot better and clearer than it was before, you refocused it well on the tensions between religious studies and policy makers rather than education. If you don't minds some suggestions, maybe after the sentence "On the example of the USA, Christianity still holds the authority as the largest single religious denomination in the country [21] and therefore has a major impact on the curriculum of sex education (SE)" I would include a sentence explaining that this is a form a indirect coercion that is beyond the policy makers/educators' control, something they just have to accept that influences their work. I know you mention it towards the end, but I think it would be good to bring up early on. Also, the sentence that ends with "which makes an infant more likely to sexually explore."I would change the word infant refers to a baby younger than 1 year old. Maybe use children or adolescents? --Avotoast (discuss • contribs) 15:40, 13 December 2020 (UTC)