User talk:Lmdoyle

Welcome to Wikibooks, Lmdoyle!

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  Getting help   Made a mistake?   Goodies, tips and tricks Thanks. Recent Runes (discuss • contribs) 00:16, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
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please review
By the assigned time, please do a short review of the following page of the wikibook: Put your review on the talk (discussion) page relevant to that page. Your review can be a brief paragraph, and can include anything you want. The purpose is to give some ideas for how to improve the page in light of its purpose within the overall textbook. Anything you can think of which would help improve the book is fair game, here are some thoughts on what you might discuss: (Those are just thoughts, you do not need to specifically address any of those questions.)
 * Strategy_for_Information_Markets/Sony_PlayStation_3
 * Is the page relevant to how you see the textbook? Should the page be removed to a different kind of book or set aside as a "case-study"?
 * Is the page organized in a coherent way? How might it be re-organized?
 * Are there important omissions on the page?
 * Are there things on the page which should be shortened?
 * Does the page need graphics, or have too many graphics?
 * Does the page need math, or have too much math?
 * Concrete thoughts about parts that need re-writing.

Since this will be editing a talk page, be sure to "sign" your comments. You may or may not be the only student asked to look at that particular page. TDang (discuss • contribs) 20:30, 30 January 2012 (UTC)