User talk:HMaloigne/sandbox/Approaches to Knowledge/2020-21/Seminar group 17/History

16th of October 2020

I've created the history page and added a bit about the history of chemistry as a discipline. I've also added a notes section to the page, in which all the references should pop up :). Please let everyone know in the discussions which adjustments you've been making to the sandbox! BASc to the future (discuss • contribs) 15:14, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
 * I have added a section about the history of photography with the emergence of photojournalism as a subdiscipline.Kuramae (discuss • contribs) 20:25, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Although they are technically correct, your citations don't look very nice (in particular [6] in paragraph 1). I know this website is for the APA style, but maybe you could have a look at it: https://rasmussen.libanswers.com/faq/32328 BASc to the future (discuss • contribs) 15:58, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the feedback. Even though I have gone through the link you sent, I am not entirely sure how to correct it, could you please bring specific suggestion on that.Kuramae (discuss • contribs) 22:53, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Perhaps make a separate paragraph with all the info from that single source. That way, you can first use a sentence to introduce the source, then write all the information, and then cite it at the end of the paragraph. Very much like example 1 of the "good" way described in above link. BASc to the future (discuss • contribs) 10:15, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the suggestion. It seems to be a little difficult since I found it was the most suitable way to build up the information in that paragraph following the chronological order, but I will keep it in mind for future contributions.Kuramae (discuss • contribs) 22:43, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

18th of October 2020

I've added the text under "History of Psychology as a Discipline" with a short look into the interception of Psychology and other disciplines in the early 21st Century. I plan to come back and check the formatting of my citations later in the afternoon. Brokentelevision2020 (discuss • contribs)


 * I had a quick read on your piece. The information you have written down is really good, and it was quite surprising to read that the opening of a laboratory is considered the starting point of psychology as a discipline. It might also be worthwhile to include information about the first journal of psychology (which I've read to be Philosophische Studien), the first professorship/university study or the first society. BASc to the future (discuss • contribs) 10:19, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * I have now made the above mentioned addition to your piece. Please let me know if there are any issues (but feel free to delete it). BASc to the future (discuss • contribs) 13:12, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you, I read your addition, and I think it does add to the contribution! Brokentelevision2020 (discuss • contribs)

23rd of October 2020

I've come back to add a picture of the RSC to my contribution. Makes the page look a bit livelier :) BASc to the future (discuss • contribs) 19:14, 23 October 2020 (UTC) Maybe you should add a little bit about major conflicts in the discipline? Just an idea! Kyoshiwarrior (discuss • contribs) 15:54, 5 November 2020 (UTC)Kyoshiwarrior

History of Linguistics

I added my piece on Linguistics. I think it's a very interdisciplinary field of study and tried to somehow show it in my contribution. Any comments or feedback would be much appreciated. Nuggethunter (discuss • contribs) 12:12, 7 November 2020 (UTC)Nuggethunter
 * Your piece has loads of very interesting information. The problem with adding all these facts, is that your piece lacks slightly in cohesion. I would recommend adding some linking words/phrases to connect your information. Perhaps you could also include information about the first linguistic society as a starting point for linguistics as a discipline. Finally, I've gone over some minor grammatical inconsistencies, and replaced BC for BCE (as BCE and CE are considered secular rather than BC and AD).
 * Thank you for your feedback and corrections. I will try to work on the coherence and add some lacking information. Nuggethunter (discuss • contribs) 14:26, 8 November 2020 (UTC)Nuggethunter
 * Hi! Some of your Wiki links didn't work so I just linked the right pages for you. Kyoshiwarrior (discuss • contribs) 22:27, 8 November 2020 (UTC)Kyoshiwarrior
 * Thank You! Nuggethunter (discuss • contribs) 10:30, 9 November 2020 (UTC)Nuggethunter

History of Photography as a Discipline: The Emergence of Photojournalism

Hello, I found your article on History of Photography as a Discipline very clear and well written. I allowed myself to add a picture of The Migrant Mother that you mentioned to illustrate what a photojournalism-picture looks like. I was just concerned by the fact that there was no mention of any society or class to make it clear that it is a discipline so I added a small part on the history of the name of it. I hope you are okay with my modifications, if not let me know ! Uclqmtr (discuss • contribs) 14:26, 7 November 2020 (UTC)Uclqmtr
 * Thank you for adding the picture and the mention. Photography is actually a very common discipline / study programme at art based universities such as UAL, that is why I did not mention anything to justify it as a discipline. --Kuramae (discuss • contribs) 20:51, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

Ok, I didn't know ! Sorry ;) --Uclqmtr (discuss • contribs) 01:28, 10 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Some of your Wiki Links do not work so I fixed that! Kyoshiwarrior (discuss • contribs) 22:30, 8 November 2020 (UTC)Kyoshiwarrior
 * Thank you for that. --Kuramae (discuss • contribs) 20:51, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

History of Social Anthropology Some of your references are missing the date when you cited it, I think that would be worth mentioning. You can do it in the format: [cited 30 October 2020], hope this helps. --Kuramae (discuss • contribs) 17:40, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

History of Human Ecology

Citation number 35 is missing many relevant information such as the access date and the title. This citation guide might be useful: : https://library-guides.ucl.ac.uk/referencing-plagiarism/vancouver#s-lg-box-wrapper-18144492 --Kuramae (discuss • contribs) 17:44, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Changed it! Thank you. Also fixed some of my citation formatting. Kyoshiwarrior (discuss • contribs) 18:49, 9 November 2020 (UTC)Kyoshiwarrior