User talk:CapsaBT

Thanks for setting up your user page, CapsaBT. --AdventureWriter (discuss • contribs) 19:14, 27 September 2012 (UTC)

Hey, CapsaBT! Went through your "Northern Pocket Gopher" field guide. Looks great overall! Made a few changes (the kind that, when reading your own writing a million times, you wouldn't catch). I would echo what some of our other colleagues have said: check your sentence structure. At times, it seems very choppy and like words might be missing. Just some suggestions... Good luck! --Lr91 (discuss • contribs) 03:24, 16 October 2012 (UTC)Lr91