User talk:Bockmal

The section I decided to edit was the opening statement in regards to the Effective Student Organization/Problems that Students Organization Face. I thought this was relevant because after reading the previous statement I felt it lacked some important information. Before, it didn't really have an opening statement that told you exactly what the contents below was about and why it is useful to club/organization members. I now feel it is more appealing and informative and lets the reader know what exactly what the motives of the section below is about.