User talk:Bedawyn

Paleoanthropology
By all mean, please add to, copyedit and comment on this project. I'm converting many pages of notes into book-format and it does need some major collaboration-type work. - Davodd 02:53, 2 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your valuable input (and copyediting). I agree with your notes on pulling out some of the chapters. I am re-organizing the book now, and think I will have them as suggested reading. As for the POV stuff, I think the issues need to be raised, but the language should be toned down with "some think" or "an argument can be made that..."-type stuff. Sure, they are weasle words, but I think it would be worse than to just leave the issues out altogether. I still have a couple more chapters to do. Unfortunately they are still in outline form from my laptop's notes. I probably will just put those notes up to finish the book in rough form - then work on fleshing them out later. Davodd 06:08, 3 Oct 2004 (UTC)