User:FuncPerf/sandbox

Name
Josh Lindenthaler

Title
The effects of Physical Activity on Sitting: The Silent Killer of Sedentary Adults

Sections
What is the background to this research?

Where is the research from?

What kind of research was this?

What did the research involve?

What were the basic results?

How did the researchers interpret the results?

What conclusions should be taken away from this research?

What are the implications of this research?

References (including the primary reference that this fact sheet relates to)

How do I get better marks
Ben will look for:


 * easy to read language and grammar.
 * well set-out, visually appealing (at least not unappealing) lay-out and appropriate use of images.
 * depth of insight - not just what they write in the paper, what does it actually mean.
 * a critique, could they have investigated a different way? any problems with their design that should cause you to question, or doubt their conclusion.
 * how does the research sit in the field, what have other papers about the topic found that support, go against what this paper suggests.
 * what are the take home messages?
 * how can the findings of this study be applied in the real world?
 * given the outcomes, what else should the reader consider?
 * think about potential risks, practical tips, on-line resources, cautions based on research (all of this should be released)

Remember the word count! Any text past the end of the word count won't be read, and you will not get marks for whatever comes after.