Talk:XML - Managing Data Exchange/The one-to-many relationship

Pre-revision comments
Revisions by Marc Hunt


 * Add the banner to the top of the page with the objectives listed
 * In the examples of implementing a one-to-many, use the example from later in the chapter with cities and hotels
 * Add more data about the inter-document relationship
 * Place the empty element tag within the schema data types section, or create another section for it
 * Place the first and third paragraphs located after the implementation techniques in the introduction section
 * Create a section header for the schema section including data types, patterns, regex, and the example
 * Move the Regex section up before the schema example to go with the discussion of patterns
 * Fix the examples so that the text stays within the box and doesn't scroll across the screen
 * Title the document and stylesheet sections

Revisions by editorial board - Moussa

After looking at the chapter and the points that Marc mentioned, these are the one I would focus on:
 * Should start like previous chapter with a short introduction then the model and use Tourguide example instead of player as Marc mentioned, this will help us stay consistent with the structure and content.
 * XML Schema Data Types should go further down next to Empty Elements with Attributes in XML Documents.
 * The introduction is empty, Marc has a good idea to get rid of the teams example, then we can keep the paragraphs and use them as the introduction.
 * Should reorganize the contents: give more relevant sections and get rid of the “Common Errors in NetBeans”, it will go to the part dedicated to “XML Editor”.
 * About the exercises, I noticed that they do include some advance stylesheet, we can put some easier exercises and transfer these to the Stylesheet chapter.
 * "Move the Regex section up before the schema example to go with the discussion of patterns" (N/A Regex section will no longer be in this chapter).
 * "Fix the examples so that the text stays within the box and doesn't scroll across the screen" (I think this one only depends on the size of your screen).
 * "Place the empty element tag within the schema data types section" (I think this one would be better than creating a new section)

Revisions by editorial board - viji


 * there are document examples for containment, intra-document, and inter-document representations for a 1:many relationship, but the schema only addresses the containment method; please include schemas for the intra-document and inter-document methods (feel free to ask Dr. Watson for resources or advice)

thank you

rtw 01:30, 2 Feb 2006 (UTC)

The preceding plan and suggested changes make sense. Go ahead Marc.

post-revision comments
viji
 * Good work on including the intra and inter document schema examples.
 * Please cut the Exercises stuff and paste into a separate examples page.

nice job

Final comments - Moussa
Overall good job. Just need to add link to exercises and answers.