Talk:Video Game Design/Introduction/Rat race

I edited the second paragraph of "The Rat Race" according to what I assumed was what the author meant. Most, if not all, of my changes were in punctuation. The last sentence of that paragraph still needs help. I cannot make heads or tails of it. I'm curious how it contributes to the book as a whole, but I'm trusting that the original author knew what they were doing. I hope my edits helped.

This is one of the worst written pages in this book. It's negative, disconcerting, bitter, and doesn't have anything to do with learning about game development.

Since I wrote it in 30m or so 8m (I've checked), I agree that it was a bit raw, you are free to improve upon it. In it I tried to transmit the idea that games (at least good games), need a special kind of person and require a specif understanding that it will not be a easy task, the outcome will require a specific and hard to reach equilibrium of a multitude of expectations and know how ( even about marketing or business processes). Games are not a simple task. I've done some more changes taking your comments into consideration... --Panic (talk) 01:46, 4 July 2008 (UTC)