Talk:User-Generated Content in Education/21st Century Physics

S.B.~ formatting, research and information, images, references, postings, editing, corrections

Three small concerns:
 * 1) There seems to be a formatting issue by your first image. There are two EDIT buttons that seem to have overlapping content. Not sure exactly how that should be fixed, but explore if you have time.
 * 2) The reference links are different from the model shared at http://en.wikibooks.org/wiki/Talk:Assistive_Technology_in_Education. All of the pages in the wikibook should have a uniform reference format. You could also check the page after yours which uses this reference format.
 * 3) Rather than copy the complete text of the Governor's announcement, it's customary to simply place a hot link (like you did) to avoid redundancy. You could quote a particularly compelling section or you could paraphrase the part that you think is most meaningful. --Sgarrigan (talk) 04:04, 8 March 2010 (UTC)

I will address these issues this evening. Thanks for your input! S.B.

I made the corrections that I could this evening. My format is a bit different with the retrieval date after the citation. It would not show up if I tried to type it in as instructed. Thanks for your help! Sharon

Looks good now --Sgarrigan (talk) 04:57, 9 March 2010 (UTC)

I will finish editing the citations today. Thanks

Spring 2011 updates
In regards to my contributions to this page: I added the category of CK-12 Foundation and content. I also added several links in the further reading section. I also updated the chapters in the Physics Book section. Furthermore, I fine tuned some items...like adding the hotlink to the Powerpoint mentioned under the Flexbook making, adding to titles, etc.

I actually had forgotten to log in a few times and undid items and redid them under my username.

Nichole K.

For my part, I added the VA state standards for each chapter of the physics flexbook, added images for that section and for the founder of Ck-12, added hotlinks in the contributors section, and modified the flexbook description to include the benefits of a flexbook.

Tom S.

Nice job Tom and Nichole, your page looks great. And Nichole I can commiserate with you not remembering to click save - I did that myself a few times! Nice Job overall.Margaret.mourer (discuss • contribs) 02:09, 7 March 2011 (UTC)

L0u1ser1ce (discuss • contribs) 20:56, 6 March 2011 (UTC)Peer Review: LouiseL0u1ser1ce (discuss • contribs) 20:56, 6 March 2011 (UTC) Nice work on all aspects. NPOV in the CK12 category and benefits of flexbooks. Images are nice - I looked at code for another image and found that adding |left or |right would wrap the text around the image.

This page looks very informative...great work! SLR

From Sue: Lots of nice work. I'm glad to see in your comments that you spent time cleaning up the page as well as adding your own content. Sometimes it is hard to find our own grammatical errors that others can see. Since this is a community project and resource, it is always useful to have the community help put our best collective face forward.