Talk:Public International Law/Nature and Purpose of International Law/Consent

Review: May 30, 2023
Dear Sué, This will certainly be a great chapter once fully fleshed out. I wonder whether links to core concepts (sovereign equality etc.) could be introduced a bit earlier. Best, Raffaela --Raffaela Kunz (discuss • contribs) 14:37, 30 May 2023 (UTC)

Review: May 12, 2023
The chapter is well-structured and easy to understand. It provides a detailed explanation of the concept of consent, including its origins, functions, and limitations. You have done an excellent job of breaking down this complex legal concepts into concise terms, making it easier for students to grasp it. The chapter provides good examples of positive law to illustrate the role of consent in international law. You also offer a valuable critical perspective on consent, which encourages students to think critically about this concept.

However, while you provided some footnotes, it would be helpful to include more references to other sources to support the arguments made in the chapter. Additionally, providing links to other chapters in the textbook could facilitate a more comprehensive understanding of consent and international law.

Furthermore, some of the sentences in the chapter are quite lengthy, which could make comprehension difficult for some readers. Shortening some of the longer sentences and breaking them up into smaller ones would improve the readability of the text.

You will find some comments in your chapter in which I elaborate on something more specifically.

Note also that the following parts are still missing: required knowledge, learning objectives, further readings, summary

Some footnotes are not formatted according to OSCOLA.

Max Milas (discuss • contribs) 07:03, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

Summary of Extended Outline
I would love some feedback on whether the chapter outline seems to cover the most important aspects of consent as a defining feature of international law. Given that it's part of the 'overarching questions' section, I would also appreciate input on how the authors of the chapters on sources, positivism, indigenous peoples, and feminist approaches to international law think this chapter can interact with theirs. Sué González Hauck (discuss • contribs) 08:45, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Summary of First Draft
This second version still isn't a full draft, but it hopefully offers a bit more detail on what I intend to cover in the individual section. I would still love some feedback especially from the people working on the sources, positivism, and indigenous peoples chapters. Sué González Hauck (discuss • contribs) 10:08, 3 February 2022 (UTC)