Talk:Public International Law/International Economic Law/Investment Law

Review: 14 June 2023
Dear Anna,

Thanks for the great chapter - I really enjoyed reading it but think that overall, it will need quite some shortening. Here and there, some restructuring would improve clarity and reader guidance (see comments in the text).

Best,

Raffaela

--Raffaela Kunz (discuss • contribs) 09:23, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Review: May 26, 2023
The chapter provides a wonderful description of the development, principles, and general rules within the field of investment law. This comprehensive coverage ensures that students gain a solid understanding of the key elements and foundational aspects of investment law. The clarity and conciseness of your explanations make it accessible to students, allowing them to grasp complex concepts while also providing a solid foundation for critical analysis.

Your writing style is engaging and student-friendly without sacrificing detail. The language used in the chapter strikes a balance between being accessible and informative, making it highly suitable for students studying investment law. This approach encourages critical thinking and invites students to delve deeper into the subject matter.

As it currently stands, the chapter is somewhat lengthy. I have identified areas within the text where potential reductions could be made without compromising the content's integrity. These suggestions aim to streamline the chapter's flow and ensure it aligns with the desired length. By implementing these changes, you can maintain the chapter's quality while adhering to the recommended length of max. 9,000 words.

You will also find some comments in your chapter in which I elaborate on something more specific. To view these comments, open your chapter page and click "Edit" in the top-right menu bar.

Some minor things:


 * Note that the following parts are still missing: required knowledge, learning objectives, conclusion
 * There are some issues with the formatting of the footnotes, which are not always consistent with the OSCOLA citation style. To ensure the chapter is fully compliant with OSCOLA, you should review the formatting of the footnotes and make the necessary corrections.
 * You could add some links to other chapters of the textbook.
 * Note that I have made some linguistic improvements to the text

Max Milas (discuss • contribs) 19:00, 26 May 2023 (UTC)