Talk:Public International Law/Approaches/TWAIL

Review: May 29, 2023
This promises to become a great chapter. A more thorough review follows once the chapter is finalised. One small note at this stage: Please bear in mind the word count! The current structure looks more extensive than what we are able to submit to the publisher.

--Raffaela Kunz (discuss • contribs) 14:51, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

Review: May 19, 2023
Your chapter provides a comprehensive and well-structured explanation of TWAIL as an approach to international law. You adeptly outline the essential concepts associated with TWAIL, ensuring that students have a clear understanding of its history and concepts. The overall structure of the chapter is commendable, and the outlined content promises an engaging and essential contribution to the textbook.

You will also find some comments in your chapter in which I elaborate on something more specifically. To view these comments, just open your chapter page and click on "Edit" in the top-right menu bar.

Some minor things:


 * Some parts of the chapter are still missing. It would be great if you could finish the chapter by mid-June at the latest. The sooner you finish, the better we can review your chapter and the more time you have to use our comments to improve the chapter. Be prepared to edit your chapter at very short notice if you hand it in late.
 * There are some issues with the formatting of the footnotes, which are not always consistent with the OSCOLA citation style. To ensure the chapter is fully compliant with OSCOLA, you should review the formatting of the footnotes and make necessary corrections.
 * Note also that the following parts are still missing: required knowledge, learning objectives, further readings, conclusion
 * You could add some links to other chapters of the textbook.
 * Note that I have made some linguistic improvements to the text

Max Milas (discuss • contribs) 09:36, 19 May 2023 (UTC)