Talk:Professionalism/The Case of Wisheart, Dhasmana, and Roylance

-We should insert pictures into the document. I think the pictures from the PPT we made are good, but I can't figure out how to put them in. Specifically, I think 1 pic/doctor should go in Background, 1 pic of Joshua Loveday (or him and his family?) should go in The Tipping Point, some pictures of the people holding signs in the Public Inquiry -Aiming for 1800 words: background is currently ~200. This is how long I think each section should/will be: --Background: 200 --The Whistleblower: 250 --The Tipping Point: 250 --Public Inquiries and GMC Hearing: 500 --Outcomes: 350 --Professionalism: 250

Kml4bz (discuss • contribs) 15:13, 4 May 2019 (UTC)

Finished Background & Next Steps
The Background section is complete and is approx 200 words. The Whistleblower has main points but can be improved. Currently approx 100 words. The Tipping Point is close to being done; I think it could use a little more information, particularly from https://www.theguardian.com/theobserver/2000/oct/01/features.review7 about Joshua Loveday's mom's side of the story and the affect her son's death had on (destroying) the family. Currently approx 100 words Professionalism is nearly done but needs more in the 1st paragraph, expanding on the doctor's failures and relating it to thalidomide's lack of apology. Currently approx 150 words. Kml4bz (discuss • contribs)