Talk:Playing a Video Game

Talk page like discussion in the book
Is the book supposed to look like a discussion between people? I don't say it's bad, it could help in the learning process, I don't know. 143.233.245.73 (talk) 19:22, 27 February 2008 (UTC)

I agree, it shouldn't read like a person-to-person conversation. A third-person point of view should be taken. Also, it should be modified to read less like it's written for a young child. Much of what is there can also be compressed to read more smoothly. Richalex2010 (talk) 17:56, 28 April 2008 (UTC)

You guys think this is good now? ~VNinja~ 20:47, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Edit Hiatus
Hey. Sorry I haven't edited this in a while. I have an excuse, but I won't waste either of our times typing it so you can read it. Anyway... My "Edit Hiatus" may possibly last another few days, but then I'll be back on top of things, okay? ~VNinja~ 12:52, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Yea, I've pretty much forgotten about this book. Sorry. ~VNinja~ 11:52, 5 October 2009 (UTC)