Talk:Field Guide/Mammals/Meadow Jumping Mouse

This species is missing the notes section of the wikibook page. Also, the references should not be after the reference cue, they should be within the text after each text the references support. Many of the sentences are incomplete sentences and would be more easily read if they had a clear subject and verb. As noted in red, the size measurements should have imperial form(inches feet etc) first with the metric form (mm, cm etc) in parentheses after.

In the range section this portion is not necessary for the wikibook: giving them the widest distribution of mice in the subfamily Zapodinae.

In the activity section, you just need information about how active this species is and when. Information such as when/if they hibernate and if they are nocturnal or diurnal etc.