Talk:Field Guide/Mammals/Eastern Gray Squirrel

Editing Notes:

-Consider including the tail length along with the full length in your “size” section -In your “description” I’m not sure what color ‘buff’ is, maybe use another word more commonly used. -You do a nice job of being concise, however I think you could add sentence starters to make things flow nicer….such as “The eastern grey squirrel lives in large woodland trees….” Or at least “They eat mainly nuts, buds, and flowers…” -You need a “Notes” section (supposedly 200-300 words) -Sources seem valid, make sure that you’re citing correctly, in wiki text format that was discussed in class Nailpolished4 (discuss • contribs) 04:21, 16 October 2012 (UTC)