Talk:Field Guide/Mammals/Deer Mouse

In the description section, I would move "Peromyscus maniculatus have rounder bodies with large, black, beady eyes and large ears with little hair." to "similar species", or take it out altogether since it's not specifying what it has rounder bodies, etc, to. You may or may just need to specify what you are comparing the peromyscus maniculatus to.

In the "diet" section, I would remove "Deer mice will collect their food and bring some to store inside of their nest." because this isn't what they are eating, but more or less what they are doing with their food which isn't necessarily necessary. You could include that information in the "activity" section instead.