Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Walking: A step in the right direction for COPD patients

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 06:21, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Ground based walking - what other walking is there, really? :)
 * Perhaps mention in the first couple of sentences that this is a critique of that paper.
 * Referencing issue could be sorted
 * Nice pic!
 * Capitalisation issues
 * What does the "from" information tell you about the quality and context of the study?
 * Do you think its that relevant to talk about where ethics came from? Does the lay reader need to know about that?
 * what is the evidence to support that this is the "gold standard for research"?
 * Explain last sentence in "kind of research" clearer
 * Some of the language is a little hard to read. Perhaps think about language clarity and the lay audience this is targeting.
 * Don't need to acronomise every test.