Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Usefulness and effects of a healthy lifestyle program in a remote Aboriginal community

This Wikibooks page is an overview and critique of the journal article 'Effectiveness of a community-directed ‘healthy lifestyle’ program in a remote Australian Aboriginal community' by Rowley et al in 2009.

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 04:03, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * A number of "factual" statements in the background are unsupported by evidence (references)
 * Background could lead more directly into why this particular research is required.
 * Research from section - so what does this mean in terms of the context/implications of the findings? What might it tell you (and other "from" information) about the quality of research and the level of evidence presented?
 * Research type - consider the types of research designs on offer and what that tells you about the level of evidence being provided. For instance, this appears to be a non-randomised, non-controlled longitudinal study study.... very different from a randomised controlled trial - as an example.
 * grammar/readability could be improved.
 * other information missing at this stage.