Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/The effects of strength and endurance training in patients with rheumatoid arthritis

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 02:45, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Looks text heavy (hard-reading) on first impression
 * please include statement at the top of the page regarding reference etc as in exemplar page
 * acronyms are bad
 * why is there a lonely subheading under background?
 * Grammatical errors throughout.
 * I have suggested subheadings for the assignment, you don't have to follow them, but it will make it easier I think to make sure you get marks.
 * the Exercise as treatment section begins to address the questions about where the research is from and what type of research it is. whilst you have begun to address these, I think you can expand on what it means more.
 * perhaps set out the methods section (use a table maybe) differently to reduce the bulk of reading in there
 * provide guidance on what the resources are for, not just the link.