Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/The effectiveness of a school-based physical activity intervention on childhood overweight and obesity

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 05:07, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * background - can it flow together a little more?
 * does specific Eastern European lack of knowledge mean we don't know worldwide, is it more that there may be contextual differences so it would be nice to know in terms of the Eastern Europeans so we can target strategies specific for them?
 * Is the table relevant? Does it add anything?
 * Objectives take up a lot of room. better way to summarise/present?
 * Can you offer an opinion about what the authors background tells you about the insights the study may offer, the quality of the evidence?
 * what does the design tell you about the quality of the evidence?
 * Meta- analyses are not more common by their nature, as they are "summaries" of other studies.
 * Further readings - do you want to put in the link to the pages, rather than as references?