Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/The effect of intense physical therapy for children with cerebral palsy

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 04:43, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Background - try to be more succinct. Text is unnecessarily long for the point being made. Also worth thinking about what is relevant background to this study - does it matter that much what the
 * image - too small to view
 * research from - what does this information mean in terms of the implications and context of the findings? what might it tell you about the quality of the research?
 * research type - the ideas you have here are good, can perhaps expand on this section.
 * results - do these scores mean anything to the lay audience?
 * conclusions - not sure the last sentence in a conclusion should be about how another study finds different results... worth addressing? earlier?
 * acronyms make reading hard, and text difficult to understand.
 * language could be improved throughout to make it easier to understand.