Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/The Impact of an Interdisciplinary School-Based Health Behaviour Intervention on Obesity Among Youth

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 04:08, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * some grammatical errors
 * comment on the reputation of the authors - stated who they were, but not what that might mean.
 * similarly - commented on the fact its a RCT, but not what that means in terms of the level of evidence it provides.
 * some of the language used is a little hard to follow e.g. due to receptiveness of girls as ... perhaps worth thinking about the readability (to a lay audience) of some of the text.