Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/The Benefits of Regular Walking on Chronic Kidney Disease

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 02:07, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Background is good, but could lead into the research being critiqued a little better
 * research from - what does this information tell you about the context, implications of likely quality of the research? What other from information is there?
 * research design - provide more lay explanation of the research design, and consider what it means in terms of the level of evidence presented (perhaps integrate the limitations section in)
 * minor mechanical errors
 * There is a fair bit of research in CKD and exercise, some of which could richly improve your critique and generally commentary regarding the implications etc.