Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Television viewing time and its association with cardiovascular disease mortality in adults

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 03:42, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Perhaps reference the first sentence (so readers can see the full reference is they want)
 * nice introduction - couple of small spacing issues.
 * research from and research kind - what does this information tell you about the context of the results, implications, and/or the level of evidence that this paper provides
 * any particular suggested strategies for the practical outcomes?