Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Strategies to increase physical activities in youth sedentary behaviour

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 05:34, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Some grammatical errors
 * Make reference to the journal in the first sentence as suggested on the exemplar template
 * what does the "from" section tell you about the context of who this research might apply to? What does it tell you about the quality of the research? (author reputations, past history, journal quality....)
 * Capitalise proper nouns
 * look more into the type of research - cross-sectional, randomised cross-over... that type of thing. And what does the type of research tell you about the quality of the evidence?
 * use past tense, the research has been conducted already (in the past)