Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Sedentary Time's Effect on Risk for Disease Incidents, All-Cause Mortality and Hospitalization in Adults Independent of Physical Activity

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 06:04, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * First sentence - critique is not about a journal, its a journal article.
 * research from - does the authors/journal imply anything about research quality? Is the research from everywhere given its a review of other articles?
 * kind of research - any comment on the quality of evidence provided by a meta-analysis (Don't agree with your last sentence in this section either - it depends
 * Research involve - you have repeated what they did (perhaps not in a lay audience summary) but made no comment on what it means, whether its good/bad.
 * results - effect size? and other insights?
 * Some minor grammatical issues.