Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Resistance training effects on muscle physiology in elderly postoperative patients

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 02:37, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * some grammatical errors.
 * a few sentences that don't quite make sense.
 * Research location (which is not necessarily the same as where is this research from as asked in the assignment) - what does this information mean in terms of the context, implications and/or quality of evidence
 * Research type - what does this mean (to the lay audience) and what does it say about the level of evidence being presented from this study
 * Language is not always appropriate for the lay audience
 * information in the table seems inconsistent - does no change mean the same as no increase, does 33% increase mean the same as increased?
 * does this approach to strength training make sense? Are there better options? Seems a weird approach to me and not something that would optimise an adaptation.