Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Physical activity and risk of end-stage kidney disease in the Singapore Chinese Health Study

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 05:29, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * The study is about Singapore residents, the background is about Australian prevalence rates, and there is no comment about the connection (or lack of) between the two.
 * Comments regarding from - what do they tell you about the context of the results, what information could help make a judgement about the quality of the research.
 * What quality of data is associated with this kind of research?
 * What are questionnaires like at estimating PA levels?
 * Wiki page reads/looks a little flat... how might you engage a reader more?