Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Leisure time physical activity at midlife and subsequent development of dementia and Alzheimer's disease

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 03:48, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * background is ok, but a little disjointed, and the lead in to the specific need for this research could be improved.
 * spacing (aesthetics) is a bit weird in places
 * research from and research kind sections - brief and limited. and does not explain what this means to the lay audience, nor what the implications, context, or level of evidence is provided by this particular study.
 * involve section - does not flow well and hard to follow what actually happened to participants. or what the study involved.
 * table should have a heading
 * Later sections - brief or missing information.