Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Improving gait in people with Dementia after resistance & functional training

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 04:16, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Some grammar issues
 * This is not "the article", it is a critique of it. consider re-wording this part.
 * Perhaps aim the background to provide more specific introductory material. The info about improved CV health is not really pertinent to this fact sheet.
 * Referencing of factual statements in intro section underdone.
 * Mentioned where the research was done, but nothing about the reputation of authors/groups/if that is relevant to outcomes, how it might influence the quality of the evidence being presented.
 * Comment on what the quality of the evidence is based on the design.
 * table in this section probably needs a title - why is the table there, what does it do?
 * so would it be worth following this recommendation? If not, what are the reasons/considerations?