Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Hydrotherapy or Supreme Ultimate Boxing for Osteoarthritis Management: You Choose

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 06:57, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Please include initial statement about which article is being critiqued as suggested in the exemplar.
 * Image has no title, no attribution, and I am not sure what the relevance of it is (though it does look nice)
 * Perhaps build the story in the background section about the disease and why its important to study this. There are 5 paragraphs in the background section - surely it can flow into 1 or 2 paragraphs as opposed to being disjointed as it is.
 * There are no references in the background section to support the "factual" statements being made. There are few references to support the ideas presented across the wiki in total.
 * Where is the research from - and what does this information tell you about the implications of the findings, and the quality of the evidence being presented?
 * What kind of research - good, but you have only addressed the blinded part of the design.
 * Suggest you attempt to improve the flow of the writing.
 * comments on effect sizes?