Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/How walking, cycling or being driven to school influences physical activity levels in children

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 04:30, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Capitalise proper nouns
 * Some grammatical errors
 * Where is the research from - what does this tell you about relevance of the study to us (Danish study), or the level of evidence (what is the reputation of the research team/journal)
 * Kind of research - what does this tell you about the quality of the evidence?
 * They wear the accelerometer for 10 hours, but they have to wear it between 7-8 am?