Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Effects of Physical Activity on Children with Autism Spectrum Disorder

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 03:55, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Background is a bit disjointed, it lacks a nice flow which culminates in the need for this particular research
 * research from and research type sections - expand, explain what these mean to the lay audience and what implications they may have to context and/or level of evidence provided.
 * research involved has lots of information - a lot of which I wonder if its relevant to point out to the lay reader. Regardless, it provides a recount of what happens, and could do with a critique (what's good, bad, fair enough) in terms of the methodology. Are there weaknesses/strengths?
 * The results section includes numbers, but it is not always clear what those numbers mean
 * try not to use acronyms