Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Dietary- Behavioral- Physical Activity intervention for childhood obesity

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 01:31, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * This " Not only do obese children have a 50% chance of being overweight as an adult, obesity in childhood has also been linked to insulin resistance, cardiovascular diseases, diabetes mellitus and other chronic diseases later in life" appears to be a very factual statement with no references/evidence to support it.
 * Background could flow better, and it could "set-up" the rationale for critiquing this particular paper better.
 * What does the "from" section tell you about the implications of the research and perhaps the level of the evidence? As an example - for the first part - Australian background prevalence is presented, but the research is from Israel, and there is no discussion about how that may influence the results/implications of the research elsewhere.
 * Language (wording) could be improved, noticed in the results in particular
 * some statements could be referenced that are not.