Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Combating Cardiovascular Disease in Rheumatic Patients: is High Intensity Interval Training (HIIT) your new defence?

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 05:50, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * grammar errors
 * background - and so this research fits in by....?
 * Research from - so this information (and perhaps other info) tells you what about the context of the findings, and the quality of the research?
 * I think the table is supposed to tell you about the quality of the research design, but the table doesnt have a heading....
 * wording in this design section is funny. And perhaps need to explain more about some of the words.. not just the cross-over bit if thats what the table does.
 * is carry-over an issue?
 * surely RA sufferers have other exercise options? why is this study relevant?
 * is the research about Rheumatoid arthritis or rheumatic disease? Both are used, but they are not necessarily the same thing.