Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/Can exercise be an effective method of treatment of Pancreatic cancer as apposed to other types of therapy?

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 01:42, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Read carefully over grammar as there are many errors (even in first line)
 * research "from" - what does this tell you about the context, implications, and potentially level of evidence
 * kind of research - be more specific about the research design. and what that means to the lay audience, and what it means in regards to the level of evidence is provides
 * remember you are addressing a lay audience
 * i understand this is a case study, and that there is limited exercise/pancreatic cancer research of this sort, but there is a lot (I just looked) of PA and pancreatic cancer research out there that would easily inform this critique (so the fact there is not other research used, nor referencing is not good). There are also resources that may not be exactly specific to this paper, but that are still likely to be of interest to readers of this resource - think more broadly.