Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/A High Protein Diet With Resistance Training and It's Effect on Body Composition and Type 2 Diabetes in Overweight and Obese Patients

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 06:49, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Can you put in first sentence as requested regarding article name etc?
 * There is an issue with your referencing of number 4 still
 * Not one original reference has been utilised, and there are many factual statements without any type of reference (not even a secondary reference as used elsewhere)
 * inconsistent language (for instance: "1" and "one" are used) and grammatical issues throughout
 * Where is research from? - what does this information tell you about the implications of the study? What does it tell you about the quality of the evidence presented?
 * What kind of research was this - The study design was a double blind random controlled study answers the question. the rest seems to be about what did the research involve. But having written that - you would need to exaplin what that means to a lay audience, and what it means in terms of the quality of the evidence.