Talk:Exercise as it relates to Disease/'Green Exercise' - Outdoor Physical Activity's Effect on Depression

Feedback --Benrattray (discuss • contribs) 02:14, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I like the intro. good set-up. (not everyone can walk outside into a green space though)
 * I like how you have mentioned a little about the authors history, you could expand on this a little. Also, is it a good journal? what odes that imply about the publication quality? Study is in Austria - will that influence implications of findings for other parts of the world?
 * Kind of research is good - be a little careful about writing for the lay audience, and see if you can be more specific about what it means in terms of the "level of evidence" the study provides
 * I tend to dislike the use of acronyms, it makes text so much harder to read.
 * should be a space between numerals and the unit of measure