Talk:Effective Student Organization/Hosting Events

I edited the meeting place section. I fixed a lower case i to I. I also fixed a sentence and rearranged the words to make it sound better and make more sense.

I edited the introductory paragraph for flow and style. I feel that it better presents the topic. Westa8 =   * 1 Planning=

o 2.1 Co-Hosting an Event
I edited the section concerning the slum doctor program and how co hosting has been effective for them because there were many sentences that didn't make sense due to missing words or strange sentence phrasings.

I edited and added to the section concerning co-hosting an event with similar clubs, (dance clubs) schmera

o 2.4 Type of event
I edited the part where it talks about rugby club. I simply added information about the club hosts games during summer to play against other teams in the region.

I added an introduction paragraph for the section to introduce the different types of events on Western's campus to offer a lead in to the rest of the section. The section goes on to explain individual clubs but I felt that an overall introduction to the section and a generalization of all clubs was beneficial.

2.3 Advertising of event
I edited this section because it didn't really say anything specific of the info fair. It mentions about word of mouth in red square, but I feel mentioning the info fair would also give more detail on ways to advertise events.

I edited the part where a member was trying to explain the difference between the number of events the Croquet Club had compared to the KSA. I added a new introduction with more detail and changed some grammer errors. Wetlej (talk) 05:30, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

=   * 2 Volunteer Opportunities= Added an introductory paragraph to make a more cohesive flow. Summarized volunteer opportunities.

o 2.1 Individual
I added a conclusion paragraph describing the importance of volunteering with examples from myself in order to describe the importance and how it affects others.

o 2.2 Group
I added a conclusion paragraph to the importance of choosing a location, because I felt everyone had posted very good information but there was no ending.

=   * 3 Reason For Events=

o 3.1 Recognition
I clarified what the speakers did for the "Against Civilization" club in this situation.

I clarified ways that the Western Men Against Violence Club did for the community.

o 3.3 Fun
Just added a bit of information about the group's goal of also teaching students about Hawaiian culture.

I edited some grammar and also added a sentence about the meeting that made their cause seem more important and clarified some information a little more.

I included an introductory paragraph for the culture sharing section. I felt this section needed something before examples.

I added a little more information on how the Harry Potter Club advertises for events like the Yule Ball.--Larson41 (talk) 16:52, 5 June 2009 (UTC)