Talk:Advanced phone customization/The need to root and install a custom OS

Sentence structure.
The topic of this book is absolutely worthy but sentence composition needs work. Here is an example.

"Custom ROMs often include far more power management options that allow you to improve battery life instead of performance if you so wish." is a run-on sentence. Stating "... if you so wish" is unnecessary. The plural case is unnecessary and distracting; singular is better. This is an alternative.

A custom ROM can include power management options not available in a stock ROM. The options can improve battery life while diminishing performance. Regards, ... PeterEasthope (discuss • contribs) 15:04, 5 July 2022 (UTC)