Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 8/Experts Take Sides/Peer Review One

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  .I enjoyed the opening quote I had to read it a couple times. .I also enjoyed the creativty you used in the conclusion.

 Suggestions  .The use of scholarly sources can make this article more credible. .Try not to use "things" as a discriptive term. It is a bad habit that I myself am working on. 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.