Foundations and Assessment of Education/Edition 1/Foundations Table of Contents/Chapter 8/Chapter FAQ/Peer Review One

Afett001 (talk) 20:00, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Part 3 - "2+2"
List TWO compliments and TWO suggestions about the article content
 * Hints:
 * Focus on the work, not the person
 * Describe "There is...", "I see.." rather than judge "You didn't..."

Compliments  . The article is very well written and organized. The multiple sidebars with the web links provide excellent further information on each topic discussed. There is a great use of color and font.

. The multiple choice questions are well-written and included two knowledge and two reasoning questions. They address key topics disused throughout the article.

 Suggestions  . The learning targets could be more specific and focus on 1-2 main topics discussed throughout the article. . The multiple choice questions could be alphabetized and the few mechanical errors I noted could be corrected. 

You can make compliments and suggestions that relate to specific areas of the paper or to the paper in general. I suggest a mixture of both. Focus on what's most important. Of course, you can also include more than two suggestions and more than two compliments. The goal is to help the author improve his/her article.

Afett001 (talk) 20:00, 10 June 2009 (UTC)